The Scrap Byn ([info]scrap_byn) wrote,
@ 2009-06-08 14:27:00
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Current mood: rushed
Current music:Jem - Save Me
Entry tags:american idol season 7 rpf, completed, cook/archuleta, fandom, fluff, less than 2000 words, pg-13, romance, rpf, slash

Far From Ordinary - PG-13
Title: Far From Ordinary
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Fluff, romance
Warnings: Real-Person Fiction, language
Fandom: American Idol Season 7 RPF
Pairing: David Cook/David Archuleta
Word Count: 1068
Completed: Yes
Notes: Beta'd by the lovely [info]jehane18; all remaining errors are my own. I meant to post this up yesterday, but it was my birthday and my best friend's graduation, so it was rather hectic!

The grass was soft, but David smiled as he watched Cook shake out the ancient red and white checkered blanket he had insisted on bringing with them. "It's a picnic! What's a picnic without a picnic blanket?" he'd argued.

David humored him, smiling as he looked on while Cook smoothed out the corners of the blanket. He stood up and admired his own work before grandly gesturing to David to take a seat. David shook his head, giggling at the antics of the older man as he sat down on a corner of the blanket. Cook set the picnic basket—and really, who actually has a picnic basket?—in the center of the blanket before settling in next to David.

David turned to Cook, studying his expression. "Why are you doing all this?"

Cook looked away, pulling the sandwiches and a bottle of red wine from the basket. "Do I need a reason?"

David frowned. "No, I just...it's not like it's our anniversary." There was no question in his voice; David had memorized all the important dates in his and Cook's relationship, and some of the not-so-important dates, like when they went on their second date, or the first time they played Scrabble together. Today was just an ordinary day.

"I can't do something spontaneous for my boyfriend?" he said, sounding extra pathetic as he wrapped his arms around David's shoulders.

David smiled and pressed a light kiss to the top of Cook's head, the other man's face pressed into his shoulder. "Of course you can."

Cook sharply pulled away, grin on his face. "Good!" he barked, rubbing his hands together. He reached into the basket again and pulled out two wine glasses. "Dig in," he said, gesturing to the sandwich set before David.

David was caught up in Cook's enthusiasm, grinning as he bit into his sandwich. Cook poured the wine, holding one glass out to David. David took it, swallowing his mouthful.

He immediately moved to pull the glass up to his lips, but Cook put his hand on David's arm, stopping him before the glass reached his mouth. "Wait." David looked at him questioningly. "A toast," Cook said.

David narrowed his eyes. "You're acting weird."

Cook's smile dimmed. "It's just a toast, Arch." He pointed with his free hand to his glass, still hovering in his hand in the air between them. David still looked confused, but he raised his glass. Cook's smile returned. "To 3 years, 4 months, and 1 week," he said, tilting his glass toward David's. Confused, David clinked the glasses and took a sip. Cook placed his hand on David's. David's eyes snapped to Cook's. "I love you," Cook said.

David smiled. "I love you, too." He leaned in and kissed Cook, gently brushing his lips across the other man's before turning it into a deeper, more passionate kiss, drawing a surprised moan from the other man as he parted his lips with his tongue. When he pulled away, he looked up at Cook through his lashes, smiling as the other man sighed in disappointment. "Now, are you going to tell me what we're doing out here?" David asked.

Cook chuckled. "I can't put anything past you, can I?"

David smiled and shrugged. "Maybe I just know you too well."

Cook's smile softened, but there was something warm and tender in his eyes. "Maybe you do." David felt as though there was more to what Cook was saying, but he couldn't figure out what it was. He smiled, somewhat puzzled. "Okay, so, I have a confession to make." David looked at him expectantly, accepting that Cook had to make a big deal out of whatever this was. "I did arrange this whole date for a reason."

"Well I figured that out," David said with a laugh.

Cook stuck his hand in his jacket pocket, and suddenly his expression turned panicked. David's brow furrowed as Cook turned frantic, searching the pockets of his jeans as well as every fold in the blanket, muttering, "Oh no, no no no, where is it? Shit."

Just then, something suddenly reflected the sunlight so that David was nearly blinded. He shifted his head to get a better look at it around the wine glass. It was a ring, sitting on the blanket just behind his glass. He picked it up. It was a simple gold band. It was—David almost dropped it in realization. This was a ring.

"Um," he said. Or tried to. His voice wasn't up to cooperating.

Cook stopped shaking the picnic basket out over the blanket as he looked over to David who still held the ring between his thumb and forefinger, staring at it in shock. "Oh," he replied. He swallowed. His arm reached back, rubbing the back of his neck. "Um. I was, uh, that is, um." He took a deep breath. "I had this whole spiel set up in my head, rehearsed and everything. Oscar-worthy, I assure you. But uh, pretty much it boils down to, um. Arch—David," he stressed, drawing David's attention up to his face. "Will you marry me?" Cook's voice wavered, unsure and just a little embarrassed as he tried to salvage what he had likely planned to be the Perfect Proposal.

David alternated between staring at the ring and at Cook's face for just a second too long, and Cook's expression turned distraught for a second before he opened his mouth to spout out damage control.

David cut him off. "Cook, I love you." Cook blinked and snapped his mouth shut, unsure where this was going, and whether or not he would like it. David reached out and put his hand on Cook's cheek. "And I want to spend my life with you." A smile broke out on David's face, and one sprouted on Cook's to match. David began nodding earnestly. "Yes, yes, the answer's yes."

The last few words were lost against the older man's lips.

When they surfaced for air an irritatingly short period of time later, David couldn't hold back his giggle. "What?" Cook asked, slipping the ring onto David's finger, admiring how it looked against his skin.

"You did all this to propose to me?"

"I wanted to make the day special," Cook defended.

David smiled and fell into the arms of his boyfr—fiancé. "It is special." He looked up and their lips met again, David's ring-clad hand coming up to cup Cook's face.




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[info]archiecookie
2009-06-09 04:31 am UTC (link)
Aw, i found this really adorable. Thanks for posting this BB. I needed some of this right now...

<3

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[info]scrap_byn
2009-06-09 04:32 am UTC (link)
Aww, that is exactly what I needed to hear, especially since I wasn't quite sure if I was going to post it until everything dissipated. So thank you so much!

<3

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[info]archiecookie
2009-06-09 04:46 am UTC (link)
No, thank you so much for posting this and basically saving my day!

<3

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[info]zingerbaby19
2009-06-09 04:41 am UTC (link)
I contemplated cutting and pasting THANK YOU about 500 times, but I figure just one heartfelt thank you should do the trick. Fluffy, happy, uplifting, and fab. Loved it.

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[info]scrap_byn
2009-06-09 04:45 am UTC (link)
I seriously just about hyperventilated at this comment, omg. Thank you! So sweet.

And to think I was worried that it was too fluffy! Silly me.

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[info]rhiminee_1
2009-06-09 04:41 am UTC (link)
I don't know why but it really tickles me that this is tagged as fluff. It's so great and FLUFFY! I finished reading and literally said, "awwwww".

I need the fluff! I crave the fluff! Keep the fluff coming!!

Great stuff, bb. Thanks for posting <3.

P.S. Listenting to "A Thousand Miles" from the JUST PURCHASED Archie fan bundle right now...perfect soundtrack! :-) Such a FLUFFY song!!

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[info]scrap_byn
2009-06-09 04:47 am UTC (link)
Hehe. I'm typically not a fluffy person, but this idea would not leave me alone. Heck, I *wrote* it, and I still go "Aww" when I reach the end.

Oh man, I need to get that fan bundle like NOW. I didn't know it was up yet!

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[info]gimme_more_bby
2009-06-09 06:25 am UTC (link)
This was wonderful! Made me smile :) I love fluff! & proposal fics! Double win! Haha.

My favorite part:

"I can't do something spontaneous for my boyfriend?" he said, sounding extra pathetic as he wrapped his arms around David's shoulders.

David smiled and pressed a light kiss to the top of Cook's head, the other man's face pressed into his shoulder. "Of course you can."


Aww, so sweet :) You rock!

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[info]scrap_byn
2009-06-09 06:28 am UTC (link)
*Grins and rolls off to the side.* You made me smile!

I love that part, myself. I can see Cook being such a goofily manipulative boyfriend.

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[info]motherendurance
2009-06-09 06:59 am UTC (link)
Oh, how perfect!

I can completely see it going down that way, complete with the cocky, yet secretly nervous Cook freaking out about where the HELL is the DAMN ring! And Archie knowing every single anniversary, including first scrabble game! :-)

What a perfect fic for the day darling... THANK YOU!
~Mama E.

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[info]scrap_byn
2009-06-09 07:11 am UTC (link)
Oh, thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed!

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[info]jehane18
2009-06-09 07:05 am UTC (link)
Baby, you already know how much I enjoyed this!

David frowned. "No, I just...it's not like it's our anniversary." There was no question in his voice; David had memorized all the important dates in his and Cook's relationship, and some of the not-so-important dates, like when they went on their second date, or the first time they played Scrabble together. Today was just an ordinary day.

I loved this. This is SO LIKE ARCHIE, hee!

"Oh," he replied. He swallowed. His arm reached back, rubbing the back of his neck. "Um. I was, uh, that is, um." He took a deep breath. "I had this whole spiel set up in my head, rehearsed and everything. Oscar-worthy, I assure you. But uh, pretty much it boils down to, um. Arch—David," he stressed, drawing David's attention up to his face. "Will you marry me?"

COOK! This is so goofy and characteristic of him. I WILL MARRY YOU, darling, if David won't!!

He looked up and their lips met again, David's ring-clad hand coming up to cup Cook's face.

And this is a great last line fade-out!

BTW, bb, your title, which you sprang on me like a little ol' perfect surprise, is just wonderful.

*hugs you silly*

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[info]jehane18
2009-06-09 07:06 am UTC (link)
(BTW, baby? "Fiance".)

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[info]scrap_byn
2009-06-09 07:18 am UTC (link)
Remind me to stop typing fics in the one word processor that lacks a spellcheck. I must have read that word 80 times and not caught that.

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[info]scrap_byn
2009-06-09 07:14 am UTC (link)
The title was SO inspired by you, bb. I was ready to post it, and I froze when I realized that I had NO FREAKING CLUE what to name this fic. And then I remembered the connection you drew between that one line and the song, and I kind of flailed about because, oh my gosh, I didn't even *mean* to do that, but it works perfectly.

Er. That was rambly.

♥♥

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[info]jehane18
2009-06-09 07:49 am UTC (link)
(*sings* - "Today's not the same as any day/it's far from ordinary..." Gosh, I love that song, and it was SO special that you thought about the title off of that, from my throwaway comment!

LY, sweetie! ♥!

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[info]gracelessheart
2009-06-09 07:06 am UTC (link)
Awww that was really cute! I LOLed at Cook's freaking out. Oh, bb. <3

David frowned. "No, I just...it's not like it's our anniversary." There was no question in his voice; David had memorized all the important dates in his and Cook's relationship, and some of the not-so-important dates, like when they went on their second date, or the first time they played Scrabble together. Today was just an ordinary day.

^ That was my favorite line, ngl. It made me grin like an idiot.

Thank you so much for this! It was lovely. :)

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[info]jehane18
2009-06-09 07:06 am UTC (link)
Hee, cross-posted with you. I loved that line too!

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[info]scrap_byn
2009-06-09 07:16 am UTC (link)
Glad you liked it! It was certainly fun to write something cute and fluffy, and there was a lot of grinning stupidly at the screen while I was writing this, haha.

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[info]ssdimes
2009-06-09 10:41 am UTC (link)
Aww, yay fluff! This was seriously cute. I especially liked that the proposal didn't go perfectly as planned. I really love imperfect romantic moments, and Cook flailing about trying to find the ring and Archie finding it first was perfect. Er, because it was imperfect. Or something? IDK, I need sleep, hopefully that made a modicum of sense. Anyway, great job! :)

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[info]scrap_byn
2009-06-09 08:15 pm UTC (link)
Haha, no, it makes perfect sense. Once I got the idea to include the proposal, it took off from there, and I just knew that it had to be imperfect. To make it perfect would be too simple, and it wouldn't feel real.

I'm glad you liked it. =)

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[info]song_to_me
2009-06-09 10:54 am UTC (link)
Awww, boys are precious! I love to see them happy together, thanks for the sweetness!

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[info]scrap_byn
2009-06-09 08:15 pm UTC (link)
They are, aren't they? =)

Thank you for reading.

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[info]andi_lee_09
2009-06-09 11:23 am UTC (link)
That was so, so, soooo CUTE!!!!

*drowning in fluff and loving every moment of it*

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[info]scrap_byn
2009-06-09 08:16 pm UTC (link)
Hee! I'm glad it worked for you.

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[info]penrith1
2009-06-09 04:47 pm UTC (link)
Sweet. Loved it.

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[info]scrap_byn
2009-06-09 08:16 pm UTC (link)
Thanks!

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[info]neyssah
2009-06-09 05:13 pm UTC (link)
I haven't been in this community for a long time but I was sad to see all the drama going on though. And I'm not the type of person who comments cause you know, I'm not a fluent English speaker so I'm scared of saying dumb things, heeeh. é_è
But I decided to start commenting posts cause you know, when a fandom goes through some problems, I think it's important to show support, to those who write fics, for example :)

SO, i LOVED this. They're too adorable. Your fic really made me happy. Fluff is basically my life btw hahahah. <3

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[info]scrap_byn
2009-06-09 08:26 pm UTC (link)
Oh, thank you so much. I really value the support, especially given everything going on right now. I kind of posted this in the face of it all; I figured everyone needed a little fluff right now. =D

And your English seems fine to me. =)

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[info]polish_wonder
2009-06-09 05:22 pm UTC (link)
omg this is adorable!!
Wonderful job:)

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[info]scrap_byn
2009-06-09 08:26 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! I'd like to think they do all the adorable themselves.

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[info]asmallsmackerel
2009-06-10 03:02 am UTC (link)
These two boys are just too precious.
I loved this proposal!fic, it was sweet, it was adorable, it was funny, and it was imperfect.
And I'm really glad that it was. :3

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[info]scrap_byn
2009-06-10 03:24 am UTC (link)
I'm so happy that I decided to go with the imperfect proposal, and that it works for so many people.

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[info]lire_casander
2009-06-11 11:55 am UTC (link)
How I managed to miss this is lost to me. But I'm glad I went over the comm to check if there was any fic I hadn't read.

This was all kinds of fluffy and sweet and romantic and so Archie... I loved it!

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[info]scrap_byn
2009-06-11 08:32 pm UTC (link)
Aw, thank you. I'm glad you caught it eventually. =)

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[info]slashophile
2009-08-02 05:09 pm UTC (link)
Ooooh, I looooved this. :D LMAO at anniversary of them playing Scrabble. Cook would totally have an anniversary for that. CUTE.

This made me smiiiile. Thank you! It was so so worth the wait, honestly.

Boyfriend turned to fiancé made my heart leap! SO ADORABLE.

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